by | January 7, 2013 · 9:02 pm
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Haiku: 10

You asked, “Visit me?”

and I knew I never would

but I said “I will”

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15 responses to “Haiku: 10”

  1. leoparadise
    January 19, 2013 at 2:50 pm

    I really liked this one :)

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  2. eikenlaan
    January 24, 2013 at 3:07 am

    This happens so often, perfect haiku moment, I wish people would say as they do and speak with one voice :) Maire

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  4. brenda
    January 25, 2013 at 12:27 pm

    “let’s do lunch”
    three words expressed – heard
    departing

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  5. Ron
    January 31, 2013 at 3:09 pm

    Great. I need to do more of them. BTW, thank you for following my blog. I am humbled and honored.

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  7. floridaborne
    January 31, 2013 at 8:18 pm

    I’m sending your blog to my son, the poet in the family. He writes in English, Portuguese and Spanish.

    Thanks for stopping by my blog.

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  8. harulawordsthatserve
    February 3, 2013 at 3:20 am

    Brilliant! I’m not even a huge Haiku fan, but this is impressive…and I’ve done it too many times…

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  9. malctg
    February 3, 2013 at 11:28 am

    Hi. Thanks for liking my poem ‘no Choice’. Best Wishes, The Foureyed Poet.

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  11. Genie
    February 3, 2013 at 4:39 pm

    Reminds me of: “How are you”, to which when asked, the person asking does not want an answer.

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  12. andersays
    February 3, 2013 at 6:00 pm

    I can almost feel the guilt

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  13. drybredquips
    February 3, 2013 at 11:42 pm

    Thanks for liking “going blank,” for following my blog, and for your poetry. Hope other quips interest you. All the best in all your writing.

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  14. Brook
    February 7, 2013 at 5:57 pm

    True haiku:) (And *thank you* for the “like” at my blog!

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