by | January 21, 2013 · 2:30 am
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I Could Have Slept All Day

from darkness to light,

suddenly a transition,

while i was sleeping,

i rolled from back to stomach,

and then i woke up sneezing.

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36 Responses to I Could Have Slept All Day

  2. BjBlogsIt
    January 23, 2013 at 12:41 pm

    I write tanka also. I started a renga page. If any want to be part of a renga poem can. Your tanka is perfect.

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  4. malctg
    January 24, 2013 at 9:10 pm

    Hi apten0dyte. Thank you so much for following my blog. Best Wishes, The Foureyed Poet.

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  5. Chatty Owl
    January 25, 2013 at 9:43 am

    Wow. So sharp and great. Wonderful.

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  7. billyeats
    January 28, 2013 at 3:43 pm

    Hey. Love your blog. Thanks for finding mine and following it.

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  8. CAROL
    January 29, 2013 at 11:18 am

    Thanks for the follow.. see you soon…

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  9. ramasoba
    January 29, 2013 at 3:34 pm

    thanks checking out my blog,much appreciated

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  10. christineevelynvance
    January 29, 2013 at 8:52 pm

    Thanks for the likes and for subscribing to my blogs!
    P.S. You must have a feather pillow. :)

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  11. modernteacher27
    January 29, 2013 at 8:57 pm

    thanks for stopping in at my blog!

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  12. Al Kline
    January 30, 2013 at 9:04 am

    Sounds like the flu! Thanks for visiting.

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  13. Cheryl
    January 30, 2013 at 3:42 pm

    Thanks for following my blog. Also, the title of this post is clever and engaging. :)

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  14. Ken W. Simpson
    January 31, 2013 at 2:59 am

    I really enjoyed it – so short, so sweet and economical.

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  15. pishnguyen
    February 2, 2013 at 8:49 pm

    This is wonderful! I particularly love the ending — what a surprise! :)

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  16. sarijj
    February 3, 2013 at 2:26 pm

    This is fantastic! Short, but full of so much promise.

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  17. coyotero2112
    February 3, 2013 at 5:05 pm

    I had a teacher once…she suggested haiku…miine always sucked…yours don’t…and…I always admire people who can do things well that I don’t have a clue about…like haiku.
    No clue about haiku…and, I’m not a very good poet either…too digressive.
    Later…

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  18. William Wolfe
    February 5, 2013 at 3:29 pm

    Nice. I love short poetry. Brevity leaves room for…everything.

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  19. agjorgenson
    February 5, 2013 at 10:43 pm

    Thanks for this, and for stopping by stillvoicing.

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  20. wordhaver
    February 6, 2013 at 12:54 am

    Thanks for giving me a refreshing romp on these pages! Needed that. Love the crispness, the playfulness of your words. Thanks for the visit and follow today – and for trail here.

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  21. cbnwali
    February 6, 2013 at 4:21 am

    Beautiful piece.
    PS thanks for liking and following my blog.

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  22. judyrobbinsart
    February 6, 2013 at 1:17 pm

    Love this little poem. Thanks so much for stopping by my blog; I really appreciate it.

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  23. 012talentsauce
    February 11, 2013 at 5:11 pm

    thanks for checking my blog. really cool

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  24. stevewthomas
    February 13, 2013 at 5:17 pm

    Been there, done that. . .Thanks for folowing my blog. . .It means a lot. . .

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  25. reneeboomer
    February 14, 2013 at 7:29 pm

    Thanks for following my blog. :) Renee

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  26. kunlexzee
    February 15, 2013 at 10:55 am

    Thanks Apten0dyte for following my blog.

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  27. amuteforamuse
    February 27, 2013 at 9:09 am

    Hi, thanks for following amuteforamuse. You have a great blog here and I look forward to reading more of your posts.

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  28. princesspoet88
    February 28, 2013 at 1:30 am

    Love this! Thanks for the follow :-)

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  29. thia licona
    February 28, 2013 at 2:04 am

    thanks for your like. i like yours too. let’s keep in touch if you like.

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  30. wisperin9shad0s
    February 28, 2013 at 11:22 am

    thanks for the like. i love the way the poem ended. did you wake from a dream when you woke sneezing?

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  31. Kye
    February 28, 2013 at 4:07 pm

    Oh that is so funny! That last line made me laugh out loud. Pure wonderful.

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  33. dmarshall58
    February 28, 2013 at 8:33 pm

    A crazy little poem… wonderful!

    Reply
  34. TemiTope
    March 1, 2013 at 11:23 am

    Nice! and thanks for liking my poems too

    Reply

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